Revision 1.2

By revising i feel like i made more changes that made my paper more complete. I usually do not revise because i just have a final copy due, so i usually just proof read. The only problem with the revising was i did not know of everything i was actually changing was correct, i almost kind of want a third revision paper to make it even more complete. The problem with next time is that i wont have a professor correct it so that makes me nervous that i wont have a good revision.