Reflection 2.2

For this paper i actually work shopped it myself. Instead of just editing the paper once then re doing the second paper i went through a first time and re wrote the paper then edited that and finished another paper. I did the post the in between paper just because it was my own personal copy that i was working on. Also i had trouble with the scholarly source because i thought i had found a reliable source that was scholarly. I also handed the paper in on the proper date that i though the paper was due so it was hanging over my head for a solid weak of whether or not i should go back and do even more work on the paper. I hope i used what the class had told me and made my paper better then it was before.