prewriting 4.1

After working with my group I figured I would do sports and concussions because of all the most recent issues in football and hockey about the concussions. For my climax I will probably tell the story of the individual who I know that went through the concussion problem. Also after the story I will put much detail in the information on concussions and why they are so serious. Also there are a lot of stories with pro athletes that talk about there concussions and why they can not play so I can always mention them. I have to make my essay almost lead straight to the climax then have a nice slow ending to my essay. My climax scene will most likely be when the individual I know tried to go back into the game to early from his concussion, then made play with his head then ended up puking because his head was still not over the first concussion. Also a player of my football team was hospitalized due to to much contact with his head. A lot can happen with concussions and it is a very strong aspect that I can talk about. You need to take them seriously.