Reflectoon 4.1

While doing this essay on Concussions I feel like I might have just said to much about my stories and not talk about concussions enough. But I liked this essay because we were allowed to pick what we wanted to do and I really wanted to do a paper on sports and concussions was perfect because of the fact that kids on my team in high school went through the concussion problem and were forced to go tot he hospital. That's another thing I may have done poorly on my paper because my title is "Sports Related Concussions" and only talk about football and how many injuries occur in football, I do not really talk about sports. I will defiantly have to workshop this paper very well and make sure that I have exactly what I want. I feel I have a good beginning but I also have a good amount of time left to work on this paper.